Its real me...........I just wanted to jot down an incident in my life, which happened while morning walk.....
It was a beautiful morning.......I was on the way to my newly resolute morning walk. After crossing the highway,I turned towards the small wood to the northern border of habitation of my city.It is a minor wood - spread in around 4 km of area and mostly contains Eucalyptus, Sesame and jungle-berry trees.
The effects of fresh breeze and greenery around me impact fully swelled my mood and I felt happy and enthusiastic walking around in that last true signature of nature in my town. Suddenly, my gaze fall to a preaching,"Save a tree, grow a plant and make a friend for life". It was a good message and i , being considered an over-enthusiastically fond of animals and nature was supposed to feel good after reading this message.instead, i felt gloomy and pensive, a little annoyed as well........
can you guess, why???
I know its is difficult.......
Let me help you........it is just because the message was deeply craved on the tree by splintering out its skin.
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....isn't that annoying!!
3 comments:
"Running out of Dreams " :- one word for this too good . very natural in choice of words . Personal touch is being visible in the flow .
the message and the motto was loud and clear . Thats the best part .
Flow was typical waterfall . which gives real comfort for the reader to particiate with the thought of writer
Flaws : conclusion !!!! to be specific style of conclusion!!
Here u are discussing something serious as "the message was deeply craved on the tree " .
In the context its a serious issue becoz u already introduced urself as nature lover , tree lover ..
in conclusion my personal feeling is that u sound bit little light... when u give ur readers the liberty to guess with saying come one try hard!!! and concluding . i personally feel bit of change of words can justify ur feeling in a right way , wht u felt annnoying
made an excellent read..
well ya what Surya said was not entirely wrong..
but then i am not quite sure what the alternative could be like..
tho would love to see it...
so Surya..plzz..!!
hey surya n abhi ..........is that ok now......let me now
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